A Winter's Day: Editor's Prize Runner-up Prose - Noan Cheng '26
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A Winter Day
Blink.
A pervasive winter chill encases the only window. Ensnared by ice, the glass burns his
fingers.
Blink.
Shifting to the wooden frame, he notes the condition of the window sill outside. There's
cracks in the gentle slope, thin, bone-deep, slitting through the marrow and out the other side. A
gentle wind now whistles through the sliver, breathing in new air. It has been long since the snow
was last cleared off; the fissures, inflamed by the wet weight, pulse a soft red buried under the
powder.
Blink.
Underneath the ice lies a slowly percolating river. Meandering even in the peak of
summer, there was a distinct pleasure in the languid twinkle that it deigned to pass off as a river
current. The soft crests, curling at each apogee, have frozen into place. They sway and lean into
the future, ignorant it is no longer extant; one can still hear her delight, nestled within the
flowing trees.
Blink.
Across the yawning water lies a small bridge; the cumulative effort of the townspeople is
visible. The entire town watched on when it was first placed, hemming and hawwing as the
carpenters hammered the passing into place; tap after delicate tap, all under her watchful eye. It
stands there now, replete in the mirth of the masses. A vast dream, melded against the grain.
Blink.
A sparrow chirps about. Gorged on the fall harvest, it is round beyond belief. Next to the
window hangs a facsimile of its kin, drawn and framed when she was but a few seasons old. Its
rotund majesty twitters again, landing gently on the railings. Turning, it spots him and his
fingers, pressed against the window.
Blink.
Rivulets of red gleam in the frigid sunlight, fluttering into the snow as the sparrow takes
flight towards him. Perching on the window sill, it preens at its overflowing viscerae as the
bridge behind crumbles into the river.
Blink.
The man turns around, facing a crowd. It is a spectacular house, built by his parents in a
generation long past. Sturdy lines and right angles cross each other corner after corner; they
chase one another, over and over and over and over, functions and optimized ingenuity
overlapping and twirling all over and imposing their will with the treess swirling around in song
and dance until all that is left is a quaint domicile, stripped of all that once was. It has endured
much; it will endure little more.
Blink.
A line forms, leading to the small rectangular box lying on the other side of the room. He
wades past the line and floats over. Heady cloud through heady cloud, he steps over on balls of
cotton, and finally lays his eyes on the small figure.
Blink.
His fingers brush a sallow, pale face. Immaculately combed hair, rustled by his touch,
tumbles down and frames sunken cheeks, as if a canvas. Its sketched lines thicken, then jut out,
like crystallized arterial mappings.
Blink.
A small child totters over. For a brief moment, the child looks into his sister's face, then
looks at the man. He shakes his head. The child purses his lips, miffed. The unwelcome news
would not hit him, but his duties remained all the same.
Blink.
He plops to the ground, searching for his paltry belongings. The child will not be disturbed no
longer by the matters of adults. The lid draws to a close, and the village men rise, clad with
shovels.
Blink.
As they trod out in the crisp snow, the child staggers to his feet, clutching a toy rake.
Ragged, impotent teeth will scrape the frozen alongside the weary, under the watchful eye of the
sparrow Its dribbling entrails will drift by, offal and wood alike, floating in the twilight river.
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